ROSS M-G Speech Feedback

• Did the introduction capture you? The intro is very captivating and really makes you think about the situation and the topic, it makes me want to hear more about the topic and listen to the rest of his speech. He has done a good job at the intro
• Is there enough information to convince you of their opinion? I only heard the intro at this point, the rest of his speech was missing, but from what I heard, what he was saying was a sad and painful picture I had in my mind. By him using pathos it convinced me of the topic
• Is their opinion clearly organised? I believe that this speech is clearly organised, he gets his opinion across and is clear about his believes, he uses Pathos and Ethos and even Logos. In my opinion this is a great speech.
• What suggestions would you make to improve the speech? Make the speech longer... I don't know how but it seems short. Also put a few more facts in it.